10.04.2012
note #165
such beautiful things carved from stone, that only the simplest of
painted augmentation is needed to create the illusion of life.
9.16.2012
note #164
friend: I get a little discouraged when I see all these popular writers on tumblr
friend: 'cause a lot of people like to use elaborate words
friend: and I stick with my to the point writing >>;
me: psh
me: no, don't be discouraged
me: it doesn't matter if you use big words or elaborate plot points or anything
me: a well written story only needs words to tell it
me: and if those words are simple, so be it
me: using language that is too stilted for the story can kill even the best
this is a truth
friend: 'cause a lot of people like to use elaborate words
friend: and I stick with my to the point writing >>;
me: psh
me: no, don't be discouraged
me: it doesn't matter if you use big words or elaborate plot points or anything
me: a well written story only needs words to tell it
me: and if those words are simple, so be it
me: using language that is too stilted for the story can kill even the best
this is a truth
8.21.2012
note #163
paid a lot for disappointment. confirming i'm less than zero in the scheme of things. i'm losing heart in ever doing this again.
8.10.2012
note #162
i guess priorities fall where they may, but sometimes it's really depressing to find out you just don't seem to register at all on the scale. welcome to the land of less than zero. u_u
this is a truth.
8.09.2012
note #161
the girl is a vampire,
she likes what she sees,
she walks in the daylight
with violent ease.
oh! helena! cherry!
her wine sun kissed lips,
what do i care
when she speaks with her hips?
the girl murders legions,
the rumors go
she's lost,
she's a demon,
frightfully so.
oh! cassidy! anna!
we've all come to see,
to watch with amazement
at just what will be.
the girl is a vampire,
a killer in deeds,
she wanders the twilight
you better pay heed.
oh callus mistake!
that one foolish thing!
to have cross her path
and found that i need
the vampire,
the killer,
a kiss from those lips!
to move together
with those luscious hips!
she likes what she sees,
she walks in the daylight
with violent ease.
oh! helena! cherry!
her wine sun kissed lips,
what do i care
when she speaks with her hips?
the girl murders legions,
the rumors go
she's lost,
she's a demon,
frightfully so.
oh! cassidy! anna!
we've all come to see,
to watch with amazement
at just what will be.
the girl is a vampire,
a killer in deeds,
she wanders the twilight
you better pay heed.
oh callus mistake!
that one foolish thing!
to have cross her path
and found that i need
the vampire,
the killer,
a kiss from those lips!
to move together
with those luscious hips!
8.08.2012
note #160
the dead lay here, buried under the dirt and stones with weathered markers at their heads. beneath years of silt they dream silent. through the murky depths i wander, slowly swimming among the ghosts of ages past.
7.25.2012
note #159
three small boys sat around a nest of blankets, a backpack nestled in the center. three pairs of eyes looked to one another and an unspoken consensus was reached.
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